Monday, May 25, 2009

memorial day, 10 :39 am

daddy home for holiday
saps my energy
wish i could go back to bed

p.s. is this a haiku? is it 5-7-5 or 7-5-7? the japanese will have to forgive me.

4 comments:

kimberlina said...

the japanese never forgive.

but as you wrote that, my mind completely blanked and i have no idea how to write a haiku. maybe w/ mayo...

Craig said...

I believe the haiku is diamond shaped.

lanet said...

5-7-5 is the traditional format, but I thought there were a couple variations?

PS Hi Craig!

lanet said...

PPS I heart haikus. I want to write them more often. Maybe I should try and write one a day for 21 days. Hmmmm...